Sunday, February 22, 2009

Tim's Idea

PREMISE:
The 4x4 grid is a house, the top floor has two grids - the DAUGHTER and the RENTER (somebody renting a room in their house) - the first floor has the MOTHER in the office and the FATHER in the kitchen.


RELATIONSHIPS:
- renter > mother = in love
- renter > father = competiton
- renter > daughter = mildly annoyed indifference

- daughter > renter = in love
- daughter > mother = jealous
- daughter > father = opposite sides

- father > renter = competition / hatred
- father > mother = protective love
- father > daughter = protective disapproval

(mother is super busy, so her POV is from behind LAPTOP)
- mother > father = distracted love
- mother > daughter = confused, ignorant of
- mother > renter = amused, innocently flattered


INCITING INCIDENT
- The renter cooks dinner to impress mother
- the father feels neglected
- the daughter hopes its to impress her
- the mother is indifferent

- everyone hangs in the balance of the mother's opinion of the tenet's meal
- father: can't be bested by the renter who is after his wife, cooking is HIS job
- the daughter: doesn't want the mother to fuel the tenet's interest, SHE wants him
- the renter is desperate for her attention, he wants this dinner to reflect his love for her...

CONCLUSION:
- She says "its okay.... [father] you cook next week." Father = happy, daughter = satisfied, renter = devastated

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