Give this one a try and tell me if its understandable.
Otto (listener) + Claude (narrative)
Sunday, March 8, 2009
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Sunday, March 1, 2009
INTERFACE WORKS!!!!
Hey guys,
got a working flash interface working. so far it works with separate FLV video files, so the actual flash interface its self won't be too large of a load.
check out the prototype:
here
it only works if you select C1 for the listener and C2 for the narrator. since we don't have any videos yet, I went ahead and substituted our work with the trailer for the new miyazaki movie. because I love miyazaki.
got a working flash interface working. so far it works with separate FLV video files, so the actual flash interface its self won't be too large of a load.
check out the prototype:
here
it only works if you select C1 for the listener and C2 for the narrator. since we don't have any videos yet, I went ahead and substituted our work with the trailer for the new miyazaki movie. because I love miyazaki.
Script and storyboard
Here's the first draft of the script. I stuck to the breakdowns that we developed earlier with the exception of Otto. It didn't seem to make much sense to have each character find him putting the underpants in the different places, because then they wouldn't be surprised to find the underpants in weird places. The only only other confusion I had was the timeline of events. Do you guys think the chronogoly events needs clarification?
Each segment consists of 3 panels and one reaction from the listening character. I attached a .jpg below of a rough storyboard for the first combination. With the exception of Otto, each character's story remains the same but the Listener's reactions change. It was a little difficult to think of ways to visualize how the Listener characters would interpret the stories.
Anyway here is the script, let me know what you guys think could be improved or if you disagree with anything.
- Brendan
Brendan Duffey
2/28/09
UNDERPANTS
STORYBOARD
LISTENER: OTTO
OTTO::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry for running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
Now we see inside Otto’s head, he has an angry expression on his face. He sees Claude stuffing Wendy’s bag full of his dirty underpants with a love struck expression on his face.
OTTO:GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George jumps out of his bed and looks down at his feet. Wendy’s underwear is scattered all over the bedroom.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
George’s girlfriend stands in the middle of George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds a pair of panties. George stares sheepishly at his feet.
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Is this supposed to make me jealous?
OTTO::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment, tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
Otto looks horrified as he imagines Claude hoarding underwear in his cavernous bedroom. The lighting is dark and dramatic, very chiaroscuro. On the wall behind Claude is a list of names and pictures of people, like he’s a serial killer collecting a list of potential targets.
LISTENER: WENDY
WENDY::OTTO
PANEL ONE
Wendy wakes up when she hears Otto sleepwalking around their bedroom.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, she finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks amused as she images her sleepwalking boyfriend putting underpants into her backpack.
WENDY:GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway to George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds up a second pair of panties
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Do these look familiar?
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks disgusted as she imagines George holding her underwear with a smug look on his face. George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway looking pissed.
WENDY::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks disgusted as she imagines Claude hoarding women’s underwear in his cavernous bedroom. The lighting is dark and dramatic, very chiaroscuro. On the wall behind Claude is a list of names and pictures of women, as if he’s a serial killer collecting a list of potential targets.
Wendy also imagines an assortment of other deviant accoutrements in Claude’s room. Blow up dolls, women’s lingerie, etc.
LISTENER: GEORGE
GEORGE::OTTO
PANEL ONE
George catches Otto sleepwalking outside his bedroom.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, he finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
George’s interpretation:
George looks pissed off as he images Otto putting the underwear onto his bed in the middle of the night
GEORGE::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry I am running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
George’s interpretation:
George looks surprised as he imagines seeing Wendy and Claude together in the same bedroom staring lovingly into each other’s eyes.
GEORGE::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Georges’ interpretation:
George looks horrified as he imagines Claude sitting in his cavernous bedroom sharpening a very large butcher knife with a crazed look on his face. The room is covered in underwear and on the wall behind Claude are photos of the rest of the housemates.
LISTENER: CLAUDE
CLAUDE::OTTO
PANEL ONE
Claude sees Otto sleepwalking outside near his car.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, he finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
Claude’s interpretation:
Claude looks broken hearted as he imagines Otto putting the underwear into his glove box. He’s crushed that it wasn’t really Wendy.
CLAUDE::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry I am running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
Claudes’s interpretation:
Wendy is sitting on her bed holding Claude’s underwear to her chest. There is a pile of underwear at her feet. She stares wistfully into the distance.
CLAUDE::GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway to George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds up a second pair of panties
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Do these look familiar?
PANEL THREE
Claude’s interpretation:
Claude looks jealous as he imagines George stroking the underwear under candlelight.
Each segment consists of 3 panels and one reaction from the listening character. I attached a .jpg below of a rough storyboard for the first combination. With the exception of Otto, each character's story remains the same but the Listener's reactions change. It was a little difficult to think of ways to visualize how the Listener characters would interpret the stories.
Anyway here is the script, let me know what you guys think could be improved or if you disagree with anything.
- Brendan
Brendan Duffey
2/28/09
UNDERPANTS
STORYBOARD
LISTENER: OTTO
OTTO::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry for running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
Now we see inside Otto’s head, he has an angry expression on his face. He sees Claude stuffing Wendy’s bag full of his dirty underpants with a love struck expression on his face.
OTTO:GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George jumps out of his bed and looks down at his feet. Wendy’s underwear is scattered all over the bedroom.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
George’s girlfriend stands in the middle of George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds a pair of panties. George stares sheepishly at his feet.
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Is this supposed to make me jealous?
OTTO::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment, tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Otto’s interpretation:
Otto looks horrified as he imagines Claude hoarding underwear in his cavernous bedroom. The lighting is dark and dramatic, very chiaroscuro. On the wall behind Claude is a list of names and pictures of people, like he’s a serial killer collecting a list of potential targets.
LISTENER: WENDY
WENDY::OTTO
PANEL ONE
Wendy wakes up when she hears Otto sleepwalking around their bedroom.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, she finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks amused as she images her sleepwalking boyfriend putting underpants into her backpack.
WENDY:GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway to George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds up a second pair of panties
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Do these look familiar?
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks disgusted as she imagines George holding her underwear with a smug look on his face. George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway looking pissed.
WENDY::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Wendy’s interpretation:
Wendy looks disgusted as she imagines Claude hoarding women’s underwear in his cavernous bedroom. The lighting is dark and dramatic, very chiaroscuro. On the wall behind Claude is a list of names and pictures of women, as if he’s a serial killer collecting a list of potential targets.
Wendy also imagines an assortment of other deviant accoutrements in Claude’s room. Blow up dolls, women’s lingerie, etc.
LISTENER: GEORGE
GEORGE::OTTO
PANEL ONE
George catches Otto sleepwalking outside his bedroom.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, he finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
George’s interpretation:
George looks pissed off as he images Otto putting the underwear onto his bed in the middle of the night
GEORGE::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry I am running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
George’s interpretation:
George looks surprised as he imagines seeing Wendy and Claude together in the same bedroom staring lovingly into each other’s eyes.
GEORGE::CLAUDE
PANEL ONE
A police officer knocks on the driver’s side window.
POLICE MAN: License and registration sir.
PANEL TWO
When Claude opens his glove compartment tons of men’s and women’s underwear bursts out.
PANEL THREE
Georges’ interpretation:
George looks horrified as he imagines Claude sitting in his cavernous bedroom sharpening a very large butcher knife with a crazed look on his face. The room is covered in underwear and on the wall behind Claude are photos of the rest of the housemates.
LISTENER: CLAUDE
CLAUDE::OTTO
PANEL ONE
Claude sees Otto sleepwalking outside near his car.
PANEL TWO
The next morning, he finds Otto naked in the bathtub.
PANEL THREE
Claude’s interpretation:
Claude looks broken hearted as he imagines Otto putting the underwear into his glove box. He’s crushed that it wasn’t really Wendy.
CLAUDE::WENDY
PANEL ONE
Wendy rushes into her professor’s office looking very frazzled.
WENDY: Hello Professor Thompson. Sorry I am running so late, I have my paper right here.
PANEL TWO
Wendy places her bag onto Professor Thompson’s desk. It’s made of warm mahogany wood. There lots of plaques and photos on the walls of his office. Wendy unzips her bag and when she pulls out her notebook, loads of dirty men’s underwear spills across the desk. Professor Thompson looks horrified.
PANEL THREE
Claudes’s interpretation:
Wendy is sitting on her bed holding Claude’s underwear to her chest. There is a pile of underwear at her feet. She stares wistfully into the distance.
CLAUDE::GEORGE
PANEL ONE
It’s early morning and George wakes up with a pair of lacy red ladies panties on the pillow next to his head.
PANEL TWO
George’s girlfriend stands in the doorway to George’s bedroom looking very pissed. She holds up a second pair of panties
GEORGE GIRL FRIEND: Do these look familiar?
PANEL THREE
Claude’s interpretation:
Claude looks jealous as he imagines George stroking the underwear under candlelight.
Thursday, February 26, 2009
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